I would grade my work at Level 3, 36 marks. I still have to adjust the article and title on the doubler page spread and fix the masthead and add more to my contents page.
I like how the masthead is large and bold at the top of the magazine cover, I would say that the price and issue number needs to be include. The pastel colours work well as theme but the pink doesnt work top of the pink top, the lettering gets a little bit lost, but other than that it's a really good cover. The contents page looks a little empty but the white writing ontop of the block black looks excellent, and shows that you have thought about the text. To improve this page i would add a little bit more text and maybe another image or two of other bands or artists that will be included in the rest of the magazine. The double page spread is really good, with the whole image covering the whole two pages, but the page break is going to break between the writing at the top and the middle girls face, maybe you should concider moving them to one side or changing things around. Overall your magazine is really good :)! Level 3- 45
I would grade my work at Level 3, 36 marks. I still have to adjust the article and title on the doubler page spread and fix the masthead and add more to my contents page.
ReplyDeleteI like how the masthead is large and bold at the top of the magazine cover, I would say that the price and issue number needs to be include. The pastel colours work well as theme but the pink doesnt work top of the pink top, the lettering gets a little bit lost, but other than that it's a really good cover.
ReplyDeleteThe contents page looks a little empty but the white writing ontop of the block black looks excellent, and shows that you have thought about the text. To improve this page i would add a little bit more text and maybe another image or two of other bands or artists that will be included in the rest of the magazine.
The double page spread is really good, with the whole image covering the whole two pages, but the page break is going to break between the writing at the top and the middle girls face, maybe you should concider moving them to one side or changing things around.
Overall your magazine is really good :)!
Level 3- 45
I would grade this work at a high level 3, with around 45/46 This is because the pictures are fitting and they all look like intresting charactors.
ReplyDeleteI think the contents page looks a little empty but they layout works well.
The Double page spread is good, there is a lot going on and the picture works really well.